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Touch of Acid by ~Des0late:iconDes0late:

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Touch of Acid


Your touch is like acid
It burns my skin
Your words like pounding music
It hurts my ears
You smell of evil
It repels me
The sight of you makes me hurt
Makes me want to hurts you

You invade my personal space
You push me until I snap
I don't want anything to do with you
I hope you realize that

Why can't you just leave me alone?
You're clinging to me
Why can't you go away?
And just leave me be

I try to push you away
I try to get you to see
You are not helping
You're hurting me

I turn around and find you there.
I don't want to be your friend
You make me hate
Just leave me alone to mend

You like me
I can tell
But seeing you everyday
Sends me to my own personal hell

Just take off and leave me alone
I don't want to hate anymore
The thought of you always there
Makes my heart heavy and sore


You think I'm angry
And I'll get over it
But I hate you
You little twit

Your touch is like acid
It burns my skin
You word’s like pounding music
It hurts my ears
You smell of evil
It repels me
The sight of you makes me hurt
Makes me want to hurt you
©2005-2010 ~Des0late
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Author's Comments

I wrote this about a boy in my Junior High School that used to bug the hell out of me by constantly following me wherever I went or he woudl magically be there before I got there. In this poem I over exagerate things alot, so it wasnt really this bad, and he wasnt really my stalker. Just a friend.

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~PC-Anime Dec 5, 2005, 9:09:52 PM
Rory? nice poem... see you tom.

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Would that I could be the peacemaker in your soul, that I might turn the discord and the rivalry of your elements into oneness and melody. -Kahlil Gibran
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~Des0late Dec 6, 2005, 6:34:05 AM
Hahaa, Ya he used to annoy the shit out of me.

But hes a good friend now. I am glad he just stopped following me everywhere....

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-||-I am the Aband0ned-||-
-||-I am the Forg0tten-||-
-||-I am the Des0late-||-

Do not forget... -||-?-||-
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~PC-Anime Dec 7, 2005, 7:04:46 PM
*nods* haven't talked/seen him in a long while.....

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Would that I could be the peacemaker in your soul, that I might turn the discord and the rivalry of your elements into oneness and melody. -Kahlil Gibran
:icondes0late:
~Des0late Dec 8, 2005, 6:34:34 AM
Youjust got to miss that guy.... I know where you can see him on Fridays...

--
-||-I am the Aband0ned-||-
-||-I am the Forg0tten-||-
-||-I am the Des0late-||-

Do not forget... -||-?-||-
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~PC-Anime Dec 10, 2005, 7:41:02 PM
where can i find him on fridays?

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Would that I could be the peacemaker in your soul, that I might turn the discord and the rivalry of your elements into oneness and melody. -Kahlil Gibran
:icondes0late:
~Des0late Dec 10, 2005, 7:59:28 PM
The 101 bus stop around 2:15 ish. He takes the 101 home

--
-||-I am the Aband0ned-||-
-||-I am the Forg0tten-||-
-||-I am the Des0late-||-

Do not forget... -||-?-||-
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~PC-Anime Dec 10, 2005, 8:05:00 PM
oh, ok, and you know this how?

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Would that I could be the peacemaker in your soul, that I might turn the discord and the rivalry of your elements into oneness and melody. -Kahlil Gibran
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~Des0late Dec 10, 2005, 9:00:51 PM
I know this becuase I go tot he same bus stop to catch the bus on firdays when my buis isnt running, and he is there before the 104 gets there and I am always like :Oomgz its Rory! geet ovr hree and give me a afckin hug!!!!11!'

--
-||-I am the Aband0ned-||-
-||-I am the Forg0tten-||-
-||-I am the Des0late-||-

Do not forget... -||-?-||-
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~PC-Anime Dec 9, 2005, 3:04:09 PM
WHERE?!?!?!?!

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Would that I could be the peacemaker in your soul, that I might turn the discord and the rivalry of your elements into oneness and melody. -Kahlil Gibran
:icondes0late:
~Des0late Dec 10, 2005, 7:22:00 PM
Where what? I forget... *big emo tear*

--
-||-I am the Aband0ned-||-
-||-I am the Forg0tten-||-
-||-I am the Des0late-||-

Do not forget... -||-?-||-
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